This is a fanfiction I wrote...can people tell me what they think of it?

Prologue

When you make a typo on the computer, you can adjust your mistakes by pressing the delete button. However, there is no delete button in life. When you make a mistake in life, there is no delete button, and you have to live with that mistake forever. The only other option is to try and fix your mistake in an attempt to fix your life forever…..